Improved Collatoral Remake!

Comparing to the original Collatoral:
First of all our version of Collatoral didn't show all aspects of the original film as we didn't start with an over the shoulder shot. This was because we didn't have enough people to be in the crowd. Also when the confrontation between the two main characters was happening we didn't do an over the shoulder shot of them both, instead we did a medium shot. We also didn't end our scene with the main character putting something in his pocket this was because we didn't refer back to the story board. Lastly we included our own interpretation of the ending of the film as in the original the characters did not shake hands.

Comparing to our first remake:
As group we feel that our version of Collatoral is much better than our first remake as the editing of our film now flows more smoothly and it is not as jumpy. Also when filming we used the the 5 second rule which allowed us to have longer scenes and making it easier to cut unnecessary parts.

Evaluation:
However when editing we realised that parts of our filming went wrong as we made some errors which was only discovered when editing. These were when Nhadia and Danriet bumped into each other, they were on opposite sides than the direction they were walking in the scene before which would cause confusion to the person watching it. Another error we made was was that we didn't allow the characters to walk into a clear space when filming.